Grammatical mistakes

Grammatical mistakes

I read the advertisement of the Suzuki Esteem on page two of May 18, 1995, issue of The Jakarta Post with disbelief, not so much of what it was trying to tell us but of the manner of its telling.

In six short lines of copy, I noticed 14 errors of grammar, word order and phraseology. Did anybody spot more, I wonder?

JAMES RICHARDS

Jakarta